This is perfect. Just what I need to shake me up a little bit. I can be such a creature of habit, but this is a beautiful reminder that the winds of change can come from all places.
That was so beautiful, and for me so very timely.. as a writer of speculative fiction myself, entering a certain stage of life… single, and with two amazing grown up sons.. I have found myself unsettled, probably for longer than I care to admit, and dreaming of moving toward a new existence, wherever that may be. I'm so ready to be unstuck… and really take control of my craft, to be the best version of my writer self. Your poetry and “garbage notes “ really moved me. Love. Love.
Thank you so much. Im glad you found this relatable. What kinds of speculative fiction do you like to write? Would love to take a look sometime. I know it can be tough to get unstuck. It takes practice.
I'll be posting soon.. but first things first - I have a duty to fulfil as a book editor. Once I've completed my current project, I'd be happy to swap prose and share some of my short stories. I'm just enjoying reading other writers for the moment. Your poetry is inspired. Keep writing.
I liked the structure of this poem. It atched the optimistic tone. I skipped along the lines as if I were preparing to set out on a new adventure. Change is necessary for continued growth. It is best to accept it as a gift.
This is such a powerful piece. This is a time when change is happening so fast. This is a grounding message for me. I am sharing this out and also with my kids. Your brilliance belongs on this stage! Thank you Franco!
Yessir … so filled with hope and suddenly I’m trudging stuck in the mud with the weight of others’ words sinking me further from my goal … time to move along my friend 😤 move over
Stunning writing, Franco. I never considered caffeine a hindrance to writing, but you make a good point. Well done for giving it up. Not an easy feat, I know. I've had my moments :)
I enjoyed your poem and notes, Franco. I love to change things up. The artist part of me cannot understand other artists who paint the same subjects in the same style. But it's suitable for sales, though. Recognition. I will take experimentation, myself.
Interesting that you mention writing under different conditions. I had to relearn how to write when I got sober. Part of me was afraid I’d be boring. Or not have enough emotion behind it.
I love your method of sharing a poem and then explaining it for us (so that we don't misinterpret your intended message). Provides me with a deeper insight.
I think just about everyone in the world right now is on the brink of big changes -- many of them still asleep, unaware of what's around the corner. It's good to ponder the idea of change.
I agree. We need room for reflection and interpretation. The world is too rush rush rush. But we need to step back sometimes and think, feel, and communicate true intent. Thank you, Connie!
I am also about to move. And have been in a state of ongoing change for a while now--wrapped around making my life as a writer. So I appreciated this piece! Thank you, Franco, and I hope the new apt. is a good fit-- for as long as it lasts!
Strange how paranoia can link up with reality now and then
I know, right
This is perfect. Just what I need to shake me up a little bit. I can be such a creature of habit, but this is a beautiful reminder that the winds of change can come from all places.
thank you, Victoria :)
That was so beautiful, and for me so very timely.. as a writer of speculative fiction myself, entering a certain stage of life… single, and with two amazing grown up sons.. I have found myself unsettled, probably for longer than I care to admit, and dreaming of moving toward a new existence, wherever that may be. I'm so ready to be unstuck… and really take control of my craft, to be the best version of my writer self. Your poetry and “garbage notes “ really moved me. Love. Love.
Thank you so much. Im glad you found this relatable. What kinds of speculative fiction do you like to write? Would love to take a look sometime. I know it can be tough to get unstuck. It takes practice.
I'll be posting soon.. but first things first - I have a duty to fulfil as a book editor. Once I've completed my current project, I'd be happy to swap prose and share some of my short stories. I'm just enjoying reading other writers for the moment. Your poetry is inspired. Keep writing.
Thank you! Sounds good. Huge thanks for the paid sub. Best of luck on your editing project.
I liked the structure of this poem. It atched the optimistic tone. I skipped along the lines as if I were preparing to set out on a new adventure. Change is necessary for continued growth. It is best to accept it as a gift.
To choose to see it as a gift, that's the essence of freedom. Thank you, K.C.
Change can be scary, but it can also propel you to new heights. Thanks for the push, Franco.
Thank you, Rod. That so true. Let's soar!
This is such a powerful piece. This is a time when change is happening so fast. This is a grounding message for me. I am sharing this out and also with my kids. Your brilliance belongs on this stage! Thank you Franco!
Thank you, Jo! That means so much to me. Thank you for your camaraderie.
beautiful. thanks
Thanks Leroy!
Yessir … so filled with hope and suddenly I’m trudging stuck in the mud with the weight of others’ words sinking me further from my goal … time to move along my friend 😤 move over
Stunning writing, Franco. I never considered caffeine a hindrance to writing, but you make a good point. Well done for giving it up. Not an easy feat, I know. I've had my moments :)
Thanks Marcia. :) glad you liked it.
I enjoyed your poem and notes, Franco. I love to change things up. The artist part of me cannot understand other artists who paint the same subjects in the same style. But it's suitable for sales, though. Recognition. I will take experimentation, myself.
Experimentation is endless fun. Thank you, Janaka. I'm glad you enjoyed it.
This sort of change has it's own sense of freedom about it. I think you're going to love it.
Thank you, Bliss 🫶
I hope you continue to publish somewhere.
Not going anywhere, still publishing here. Don't worry.
Good to know.
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So glad you’re here and for being a guide!
Thank you, so glad you're here too 🫶
Interesting that you mention writing under different conditions. I had to relearn how to write when I got sober. Part of me was afraid I’d be boring. Or not have enough emotion behind it.
Yes that's the fear talking, but we can be just as interesting if not more so without the extra substance.
Very true!
I love your method of sharing a poem and then explaining it for us (so that we don't misinterpret your intended message). Provides me with a deeper insight.
I think just about everyone in the world right now is on the brink of big changes -- many of them still asleep, unaware of what's around the corner. It's good to ponder the idea of change.
I agree. We need room for reflection and interpretation. The world is too rush rush rush. But we need to step back sometimes and think, feel, and communicate true intent. Thank you, Connie!
I am also about to move. And have been in a state of ongoing change for a while now--wrapped around making my life as a writer. So I appreciated this piece! Thank you, Franco, and I hope the new apt. is a good fit-- for as long as it lasts!
Thank you, Jill ❤️ good luck with the move. Hopefully the constant flux makes us better in a way.
My favorite post by you so far.
oh thank you, Joan! That's special to hear.