I am totally like this. I get so caught up in the perceptions. Sometimes you have to let it all go and say fuck it and get on with your life! Fantastic prose.
So true, especially as I am guilty of rarely, if ever, thinking as highly of others as expected (literally, demanded in today’s society). I used to think one ages out of ‘perceptions’ however…….
I love it, Franco! So real! This constant self-evaluation through the eyes of others and the subsequent self-punishment for all the imperfections seen only by oneself… Vicious circle. The ending is splendid!
than it thinks it sees itself " - true...it's all true, including the ending which in a sense subverts the preceding...seems to me all necessary truths are necessary paradoxes.
you must have an interesting dream life then :) thank you for the comment. I'm glad to hear it resonated with you. Looking forward to checking out some of your writing as well.
I love this piece, especially - "can my consciousness kiss yours"
Yes, I like that line too. Magical.
Thanks!
❤️ thanks Mary, happy you like it
I am totally like this. I get so caught up in the perceptions. Sometimes you have to let it all go and say fuck it and get on with your life! Fantastic prose.
thanks Victoria
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So true, especially as I am guilty of rarely, if ever, thinking as highly of others as expected (literally, demanded in today’s society). I used to think one ages out of ‘perceptions’ however…….
I used to think that too, but even now in my thirties I find I still do it, it's tough.
I’m in my 50’s ......
Thank you ❤️
This is a wonderful piece and very relatable to me, Franco.
Thank you, Mia. Happy that you could relate 😊
Brilliant. I kinda needed this..I worry too much sometimes.
It's natural, I'm glad you enjoyed it.
I love it, Franco! So real! This constant self-evaluation through the eyes of others and the subsequent self-punishment for all the imperfections seen only by oneself… Vicious circle. The ending is splendid!
thank you, Masha. glad you liked it!
A great reminder not to take myself so seriously!
for sure! thanks, Wendy
"no one’s mind sees another better
than it thinks it sees itself " - true...it's all true, including the ending which in a sense subverts the preceding...seems to me all necessary truths are necessary paradoxes.
:) thanks, CT
Oh the scars we put on ourselves at times. Very relatable piece!
you must have an interesting dream life then :) thank you for the comment. I'm glad to hear it resonated with you. Looking forward to checking out some of your writing as well.
Thanks my dude 😎