You m*********** you kicked my a** this morning. Listen. I know you don't want to hear anything religious and I don't blame you. It's 99.44100% b*******. But listen what Jesus said, I think this is about what you're talking about. Jesus said "If you want to be my disciple you must, by comparison, hate everyone else... your father and your mother, wife, and children, brothers and sisters. Yes, even your own life. Otherwise, you can not be my disciple." Sit on that for a while. I really love your stuff Franco. It's great.
I've really enjoyed reading your comments so far, Jeff. Glad you're enjoying and engaging with my work. This definitely gives me something to think about and it's exactly the kind of insight I enjoy as a writer. Thank you, always!
Same here. There seems to be an emerging understanding, though incongrous against the status quo, is needed at this time. Writers like you have the capability to touch people deeply; those who have "ears to hear" and an open heart.
Well said. The title is perfect, mate. I feel that way a lot. Social graces create a barrier between us and the real.
I'm with you Mog. It's rough out there. All the fakeness.
thanks for reading Victoria
I agree as well. I really appreciate the candidness of your poetry, Franco. Reminds me what's important.
absolutely. thanks, mog
Yes, exactly -as if the entire world is auditioning for another f'd up reality tv show. Very well said
Thank you :) That's a good way to put it!
You m*********** you kicked my a** this morning. Listen. I know you don't want to hear anything religious and I don't blame you. It's 99.44100% b*******. But listen what Jesus said, I think this is about what you're talking about. Jesus said "If you want to be my disciple you must, by comparison, hate everyone else... your father and your mother, wife, and children, brothers and sisters. Yes, even your own life. Otherwise, you can not be my disciple." Sit on that for a while. I really love your stuff Franco. It's great.
I've really enjoyed reading your comments so far, Jeff. Glad you're enjoying and engaging with my work. This definitely gives me something to think about and it's exactly the kind of insight I enjoy as a writer. Thank you, always!
Same here. There seems to be an emerging understanding, though incongrous against the status quo, is needed at this time. Writers like you have the capability to touch people deeply; those who have "ears to hear" and an open heart.
Thank you, Jeff :)
I remember once I sat near the top of a mountain and counted the amount of times someone would say "That's beautiful," and move on.
With the mechanical precision and timing of a Swiss clock.
Thanks, Carlo. lad you enjoyed this one!
Agreed, this one had my laughing too! All that success and happiness talk can be nauseating.
thanks, Scarlett
Thanks, Karl! Glad you could relate.