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May 20Liked by Franco Amati

THIS POEM IS RIPE FOR AN ANSWER FROM ANOTHER POET, RUDYARD KIPLING:

If you can dream—and not make dreams your master;

If you can think—and not make thoughts your aim;

If you can meet with Triumph (victory) and Disaster (defeat)

And treat those two impostors just the same;

If you can bear to hear the truth you’ve spoken

Twisted by knaves to make a trap for fools,

Or watch the things you gave your life to, broken,

And stoop and build ’em up with worn-out tools:

THEN YOU WILL BE A MAN, MY SON...OR WOMAN OR PERSON

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Wow I love it. Thank you for this answer from RK. I will not forget it.

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I gave the Kipling poem, IF, to both of my sons...I think they have taken it to heart:

https://www.poetryfoundation.org/poems/46473/if---

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The dichotomy of choice: freedom as well as its personal responsibility. Humanity's eternal conundrum...

As you've written, it's all we can do to try; that's what life is about anyhow, pushing through the obstacles and just trying and trying again.

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Yes absolutely. Thank you, Bethel!

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May 20Liked by Franco Amati

I find it so easy to resonate with your stuff, Franco.

When you talk about how painful small talk is--I'm over here screaming and feeling so seen. Sometimes friends will text me just to make small talk and it's so difficult to engage. I'm right there with you.

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Good to know people are connecting with what I have to say. Thank you for the comment, AJ

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Persecution taunts Tantalus every day like decisions to reach out for the carrot at the end of a stick and have it taken away. Then you keep pushing the plow. Slowly every day another foot in the grave. But you see not Tantalus but a pencil to write alone with your thoughts for others maybe to read and continue with your day dreams taking one step at a time to explore possibilities and reach heights to get a better view to make a decision to jump or not. Hamlet wonders what to do next. He hesitates. Decisions. It just takes a moment. Wait a minute or a few seconds, another heart beat. You may change your mind get a new perspective. And life goes o. The carrot is delicious once you finish the task.

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Thank you for this!

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May 20Liked by Franco Amati

"paper falls from my hand and has landed" gave me the intriguing feelies. what could it mean? I like the finality of it - a soft choice, but one that has an impact nonetheless.

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Thank you, it references a personal choice that I had to make. Thank you, Van :)

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I do like that “rise at 8 die at 5.”

Brilliant Franco.

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Thank you, Karl. Means a lot.

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If there's a count of how many people passionately hate small talk, I'm sure I'll be included. Yet sometimes, I just might have to say something trivial to someone. I think as much as we find it annoying, it's still good, in a way. After all, it's human nature. Great poem, Franco. Sth I deeply resonate with.

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Thank you, Trevor! Glad to hear this. One resonated with you.

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Breathe. Just breathe.

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Yes, breathe.

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Beautiful

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Thank you, Heidi 🙂

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WOW! Great read! Responsibly not just to oneself but for others is hard to see these days. Barriers are what makes life interesting, frustrating, maddening, scary, etc. Thank you Franco!

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